Got endings C and B, will come back for A. I liked this, it's an interesting story telling method, and shows what Twine can do with a bit of effort. It took a second to really catch on to how it worked at first, but it kinda fit with the disorientation in the narrative. The audio was great, seamless use of music, Really helped paint a picture along with the narrative. Sound effects might be one notch above comfortable (I wear headphones.) Also, I think I caught a typo during C, "aling." I think it was supposed to be "along."
Very cool... loved the split screen delivery of information and the sound design. Getting the endings in the order of C, A, and B was a compelling way to experience this... hearing the ghost pilot saying, "in the next life, you're mine" as the closing note. Also the way the perspective is like... the pilot's perspective from the mech's perspective? God damn I love stories about gross weird mech identity body situations.
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Got endings C and B, will come back for A. I liked this, it's an interesting story telling method, and shows what Twine can do with a bit of effort. It took a second to really catch on to how it worked at first, but it kinda fit with the disorientation in the narrative. The audio was great, seamless use of music, Really helped paint a picture along with the narrative. Sound effects might be one notch above comfortable (I wear headphones.) Also, I think I caught a typo during C, "aling." I think it was supposed to be "along."
Very cool... loved the split screen delivery of information and the sound design. Getting the endings in the order of C, A, and B was a compelling way to experience this... hearing the ghost pilot saying, "in the next life, you're mine" as the closing note. Also the way the perspective is like... the pilot's perspective from the mech's perspective? God damn I love stories about gross weird mech identity body situations.